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The Fate of a Keyblade Wielder

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1 The Fate of a Keyblade Wielder on Sun Feb 21, 2010 9:22 pm

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Hi everyone, I think this is my first story on the forum Very Happy
As you can see or maybe you have known, I'm a big fan of Kingdom Hearts and Mana Series. So in my stories the would be some similarity Embarassed
And sorry if I have some of or maybe many grammar mistakes cause I'm still learning Embarassed

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Chapter One
~Fate Dreams

She awoke in the strange chamber. She saw a staff inside of it. She touched it without thinking first. Suddenly, she heard a voice

"Your fate is so harsh if you take this staff. You don't have a choice. You have the power of Wisdom and knowlegde. You fight and think with your hearts."

She took it without thinking as if she didn't have any will to refuse. Then the floor cracked and she fell into the darkness. She arrived at the another chamber. She saw a strange, white-looking goblet standing there. She took it. She could feel the power inside of it.

"The power of light. The power that could destroy the darkness. All pure white as snow. Use the power to defend the people you love. If you take this, your path would be harsh than before. But don't be afraid. You could control and face what lies ahead."

Then suddenly all becomes white and she woke up.

"Mmmm, what just have happened? I feel that I didn't sleep at all! What time is it?"

She looked on her table and saw her clock.

"OMG!! It's 7 'o clock already! I'm late!"


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2 Re: The Fate of a Keyblade Wielder on Mon Feb 22, 2010 1:27 pm

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I like the beginning so far, Luthie. And I don't see any spelling or grammar mistakes so far-or if there are, they're so minor that they're not noticeable. Wink

I can't wait to find out what happens next. Very Happy

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3 Re: The Fate of a Keyblade Wielder on Mon Feb 22, 2010 3:26 pm

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Interesting start luthie-chan!
I'm so looking forward to the next update Very Happy


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4 Re: The Fate of a Keyblade Wielder on Mon Feb 22, 2010 8:39 pm

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Hi there, Callista and Val.
Thanks Very Happy
I'll see what I can do next Wink


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5 Re: The Fate of a Keyblade Wielder on Tue Feb 23, 2010 6:40 pm

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Nice story luthie ^_^

it looks like... pretty cure?

Nice imagination afro

oh yea, can't wait for the nxt update. Hope u add some love stories What a Face

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6 Re: The Fate of a Keyblade Wielder on Thu Feb 25, 2010 4:20 pm

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wow luthie this is great story~~~
love it ( this ish kiri-poo)

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7 Re: The Fate of a Keyblade Wielder on Thu Feb 25, 2010 8:25 pm

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Great start, Luthie Smile
And I must say that you know how to handle good words,and how to create captivate sentences Very Happy
Waiting for your next update.

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